Two Voices- Love

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loving you loving you

is what I was born to do

comes easy



Loving you Loving you

completes me completes me



You are my You are my

soulmate

best friend

lover

everything



Our Love Our Love

is powerful

magical



Forever Forever

***I cannot write in two colums for this two voices poem, so i hope the different fonts to show the different voices.

4 comments:

BK said...

I got that Ashley and it was nicely lyrical with the repetitions.
Bonnie

Stacey from Two Writing Teachers said...

Very neat!

Kevin said...

It is tricky to convey the multiple voices on a format that doesn't quite allow it.
Frustrating, I am sure.
Kevin

GirlGriot said...

Nice. I didn't get the two-voices thing at first. I did on the second read ... and it really changes the poem! That's interesting to me, how it works perfectly well as one voice or two, but the tone/feel of the poem changes. Nice.