Two Voices- Love

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loving you loving you

is what I was born to do

comes easy

Loving you Loving you

completes me completes me

You are my You are my


best friend



Our Love Our Love

is powerful


Forever Forever

***I cannot write in two colums for this two voices poem, so i hope the different fonts to show the different voices.


BK said...

I got that Ashley and it was nicely lyrical with the repetitions.

Stacey from Two Writing Teachers said...

Very neat!

Kevin said...

It is tricky to convey the multiple voices on a format that doesn't quite allow it.
Frustrating, I am sure.

GirlGriot said...

Nice. I didn't get the two-voices thing at first. I did on the second read ... and it really changes the poem! That's interesting to me, how it works perfectly well as one voice or two, but the tone/feel of the poem changes. Nice.