Two Voices- Love
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loving you loving you
is what I was born to do
comes easy
Loving you Loving you
completes me completes me
You are my You are my
soulmate
best friend
lover
everything
Our Love Our Love
is powerful
magical
Forever Forever
***I cannot write in two colums for this two voices poem, so i hope the different fonts to show the different voices.
4 comments:
I got that Ashley and it was nicely lyrical with the repetitions.
Bonnie
Very neat!
It is tricky to convey the multiple voices on a format that doesn't quite allow it.
Frustrating, I am sure.
Kevin
Nice. I didn't get the two-voices thing at first. I did on the second read ... and it really changes the poem! That's interesting to me, how it works perfectly well as one voice or two, but the tone/feel of the poem changes. Nice.
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